Comment: Is this essay really appropriate for college admission? Will they not think of you as a “late” person?
Comment: I like it. It would never get you into college, but I do enjoy it.
Comment: what the hell is the point of this essay?
Comment: why would a collage want a student that’s always late to class? maybe there’s something or some points i don’t get… is it just me who don’t understand?!
Comment: Um what the hell are you thinking sending this to a college?
Comment: This essay gives you the idea that this person doesn’t try hard when it comes to places they don’t want to be or things they don’t want to do, and I really can’t imagine they would accept this candidate. Aside from that, there are several syntactical and mechanical errors.
Comment: whoever made this essay puts in “dam” too much. i dont think i gives a positive feeling to whoever is reading this if theres dam dam dam dam…etc
Comment: I like reading the essay. I can understand why you would send this in. You are being honest and telling the College that you are a person who can be honest and you show that you have grown during your time at the diner. It is certainly different from alot of the one’s being sent in
Comment: Do you think colleges really care about “honest”? They would put this candidate into the reject pile right away!
Comment: it got me lost…i would vote lower if possible…go with a negitive 5
Comment: I understand this essay; in fact, I would have written one like this myself had I had the idea first.
Comment: Also, colleges would be far more likely to accept someone who knows that “a lot” is two words and that apostrophes are for possessives and contractions, not plurals. *smiles sweetly*